Tuesday 1 May 2018
100 Word Challenge T2 W1
All that misty dust. That crimson blood. People shooting frantically hoping to survive. I try to dig a trench hoping to not go to the grave. People around me,friends, enemies all around trying to survive. This battle of sorts world war III all triggered from Trump and Kim acting like little children. If only there was one way to stop war. Sadly there isn’t. When people lose control everyone gets affected. If only people knew all of these ad things can stop in this world. Sadly it will continue. All we can do is control our lives and our choices.
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You have a setting and have identified a problem. The structure you have used is clear - you have a beginning, middle and an end.
ReplyDeleteYou could try to narrow down your texts to a specific time - e.g. a moment in time, so that you can practise using precise verbs and add in figurative language devices.